Walt: write a creative story in paragraphs.
On my island people only my family and friends are allowed. On my island will be anything you want like water world or dream world theme parks. There will be school so the children can learn. Every house on my island is a mansion. I would like everyone to be happy not sad.
When it is the weekend I’d go to a go kart course and race with my friends. We can have so much fun driving go karts. When we are hungry we can go to the shop and get something to eat. When we are finished we can go to a movie theatre.
I would have stadiums for every single sport like football, rugby and much more. I would like to have indoor stadiums because if it rains you won't get wet and cold. The most sport that I would play is soft ball.
If I had all the money I would buy my island and turn it into paradise.
1 comments:
Nice story Blade. I like the part when it says ''Every house on my island is a mansion,''. If you had a chance to change a part, which part would you change?
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