Music

WALT: write a narrative.

2 write in paragraphs.

One day Tom went to the shop and bought some cds. Tom loved listening to his music.

When Tom got home he started to listen to his cds. Tom blasted his music loud in his bedroom. Mum would always got annoyed when Tom played his music out loud. When mum tried talking to him,he couldn't  hear. This annoyed Mum even more.

Mum told Tom to turn his music down but Tom could not hear her. Mum tried knocking on Tom’s bedroom door but Tom could not hear mum knocking on the door. Mum was so exasperated that mum smashed through Tom’s bedroom door. Tom got a fright when mum smashed through his bedroom door.

Mum went to Tom’s stereo and turned the music down. Tom asked mum why did you turn my music down? Mum replied because it was too loud and I was getting annoyed with your very loud music. Tom said  sorry for the very loud and agreed not do that ever again.

Dont play your music too loud.This upsets your mum and she will turn it down.