A Miserable Day

WALT: write a well sequenced story set in Ancient Egypt.

One morning Dom and Daniel was trying to build a boat made out of woon. Dom and Daniel went out to go and find some wood.

When Dom and Daniel found some wood they started to build the boat. Dom and Daniel knew that they had something missing. They were missing some rope so they could tie the wood up to form a boat. When Dom and Daniel found some rope near the River Nile they went back to where they were building their boat. When they had completed their little boat they went out and got some more wood so they could make so paddles.

When Dom and Daniel finish completing their boat and their paddles they took it to the River Nile and see if it would work. The boat worked on the water so Dom and Daniel started to paddle. When Dom and Daniel got use to the boat they turned into a big massif rock. When they hit the massif rock the front of the boat CRACKED and water started to rush  into the boat.

Dom and Daniel decided to leap out of their boat into the River Nile and started to swim. Dom and Daniel were freaking out because they had never swam in the River Nile. Dom and Daniel was trying to swim but the current was to strong for them. Dom managed to get hold of a rock but daniel could not. Daniel was freaking out because Daniel could not swim.

So Dom saw one of their paddles they had made and Dom told Daniel try and grab this paddle but Daniel could not reach. So Dom went into the water and saw with the paddle with him so Daniel could reach. When Daniel grabbed the paddle Dom started to swim back to land. Dom managed to swam back to land with Daniel holding on tight of the paddle. When Dom and Daniel court their breath Daniel thanked Dom for saving him. After that they went back home and got warm and had some lunch after that.

If you don't know how to swim try and learn yourself.