WALT: write a story in sequence.
The Big Jump
Yesterday the weather was fascinating in the early dawn. Now he can do his big jump out of space. He was afraid because he wanted to break the world record.
Josh and his crew flew to New Zealand in a UFO. When they landed in New Zealand they started the big jump. When he was going up he had butterflies in his stomach.
“Josh are you ready to jump?” say Mission control .
Josh replied, “Yes I am ready to jump”
“Jack ready when you are, to jump”
Josh jumped out of the balloon and he was screaming. Half way down Josh said, “I feel like passing out”.
Mission control was scared because they thought he probably would not land. They had no control of Josh and that’s why they were scared.
When Josh pulled his parachute, Mission control was all over the moon. When Josh landed he landed perfectly. Everyone came out and hugged him.
Josh was so happy that he kissed the ground. Josh now knows not to be scared of heights and always try new things.
6 comments:
I like your story and also your title. The funniest part about your story is the conclusion and how he is scared. If you had to do a recount would it be similar to your story?
Nice story Blade. You have great ideas and it's lucky enough that you have shared this story with us. Do you think that Fearless Phoenix would enjoy this story?
Wow Blade you have a nice story. Do Josh and his crew really have a UFO?.
No Jalal that was just a make up. Do you know what a UFO is?
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