Mum stepped.....

Mum stepped.....

WALT: use better words.

Mum stepped out of the limo and walked onto the bright red carpet. Mum was so famous that the paparazzi were taking photos of her.

When mum was walking along the red carpet her high heel shoe broke. Mum ran back into the limo and  speeded back home to get  a new pair of high heels.  Fortunately, Mum had many pairs of shoes. Mum felt very embarrassed when her high heels broke. She raced inside when she got home. When mum got inside the children were at  the table drawing and dad was watching a game of rugby on TV. Then  she was hunting for some of her high heels in her closet. Finally, she found a  pair to match her outfit.  Back she leaped into the limo.

The driver whizzed  mum  back to the red carpet. The new high heels were perfect for a walk down the red carpet. While  she was walking down the red carpet she wore a brilliant smile and looked elegant in her outfit.  When mum was at the end of the red carpet she was interviewed by Three news. Mum was on tv and luckily her high heels did not break on her this time. All the time the cameras flashed.  After that mum went back in the limo and went back home.When mum got home her children said, “Mum, we recognized you on tv and saw you getting interviewed by three news.”

Mum flashed her tv smile and headed straight to dad. She showed Dad the award she received for being an inspirational mum.